Algernon: "[she]is still concious" (Wilde, 9)
Emilia: "O my good lord" (Shakespeare, 5.2.105)
Entity: "You must stay put" (Currie, 5)
Algernon: "It is very foolish of you" (Wilde, 6)
Emilia: "I am bound to speak" (Shakespeare, 5.2.181)
Algernon: "produce your explanation" (Wilde, 5)
Emilia: "[she] might quickly make it right"(Shakespeare, 4.3.84)
Entity: "For now, let [her] worry about these things" (Currie, 8)
Algernon: "modern literature [is] a complete impossibility!" (Wilde, 6)
Entity: "They frighten you almost literally to death" (Currie, 32)
Algernon: "It is a great bore" (Wilde, 9)
Entity: "The power is [hers]" (Currie, 30)
Algernon: "Yes, but [she] must be serious about it" (Wilde, 8)
Emilia: "Say that [she] slack [her] duties" (Shakespeare, 4.3.90)
Algernon: "look at the inscription inside...I call that business" (Wilde, 3,4)
I really like the sort of "conflict" in the beginning, with Emilia tempted to correct you while the Entity would rather leave you alone. Oh, and then there's Algernon being is usual, silly self. I like the way you ended especially, calling your work on the AP test "business," because it really sets the tone for how you're approaching the upcoming exam.
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